Ohio Impromptu

Note: The magazine gave me a flexible word limit, but said don't make them too long. So I tried not to. Also note: Having an intense dislike of deadlines, these ...

"Forced rhymes are bad for your posture."

"Like this," Jill explained. "I see," said Bob. "Also this." "What happened to your dialogue tag?" "Your tag is gone too. We're the only characters, so tags aren't needed anymore." ...

To begin with, let me say that I don't do spelling and grammar stuff. That isn't what writing is about, so I'll skip ahead to the important stuff, which is ...

13 is Braveheart. :wink:

Watch the movie Almost Famous. That's my dream job. :roll:

You should probably rethink the words you're saying. I won't explain why, but I hope someone does soon.

My car's name is Norman, and my iPod's name is George. Oh, and my bass's name is Jess. 8)

I can't stand large amounts of action and adventure. And I'm not opposed to page-long descriptions. Anyway, it seems to me that, at least around here, the average boy doesn't ...

Let me first get a few things out of the way, before I say what I thought of the story overall: I was loosing my mind. losing* Pearmy High, which ...

That is perhaps the best thing I have ever heard.

But if you can't appreciate the entirety of something (including where it came from) then you can't appreciate it. If you love rainbows, but don't like the scientific explanation behind ...

Wow, what a buzzkill... I'm afraid I have to disagree. We might be Lemmings, but this is no cliff. We're just having a bit of fun. You seem to have ...

To be honest, I didn't expect much from the first story of a fourteen year-old. I really expected to, as you suggested, rip it apart. But I'm afraid I can't ...

Wow. I've heard the word 'fanmix' thrown around a few times, and had no idea what the hell anyone meant by it. But now it's obvious that it's exactly what ...